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Manic
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Manic~~~
I have something thing to do!
Yeah yeah yeah, manic manic be manic!
Jump around, scream, common sceam real loud
lets go brake some windows,
its so nice outside!
Manic manic be manic!
oh its so natural!
Dont worry Mama, baby boys doin what hes sposta
Dont worry Papa, baby girls in good hands.
sun setting!
times a waistin lets go swimming!
No, no its not too cold!
Hey, you a cat?
I ASKED if you were a cat!
Wanna go jump off some high roofs?
Manic Manic be manic!
its totally natural!
Hey I know little boy lets go down to the ocean
yeah yeah yeah, its such a nice day
play with your shovel.
Bury yourself. Sure sure, Ill bury you...
Tide coming close!
Funny Funny Funny!! PANIC!!
Manic manic be manic!!!
Be Domestic, go to jail.
Do it for your kid man! Common for your kid!
Look outside! Weve wasted the day!
Poor little exiting life.
Hey little boy aint life grand?
You enjoying your casket? It aint too tight?
Manic manic,
Let's go running!
Running on empty
with the damned.
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PsychoScissors
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2004-03-28 15:37:42]
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Re: Manic
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:02:54 PM AEST
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whoa.. this is really good very unique i havnt read anything like this before.. you did a very good job constructing it.. it is all about free style which i enjoyed.. keep it up
if you keep writing like this you will have a fan :)
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Re: Manic
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by Nate on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:12:13 PM AEST
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| wooohoooo great. .. . i like it |
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Re: Manic
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by angrycheerios on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:18:31 PM AEST
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| hey! hey! hey!...i effin love it. very nice work :) |
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Re: Manic
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:23:32 PM AEST
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wow.. this blew me away.. i could barely breathe through the entire poem.. very expressive..
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