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Lending My Muse To Thee
Contributed by
baronhawk
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:12:37 PM in AEST
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Beyond copper wires
twisted pair connectors
I blow to thee a kiss,
poetic of course
I float to thee a wish,
sincerely enough
upon the stylings of rhyme
the ponderings of metres
may your lyrics shine
and your rhythm matures
on the winds of inspiration
riding upon gilded wings
I lend to thee my muse
if only for but a while,
an iterlude at least
but above and beyond
the whisperings of muses
lies knowledge and visions
the keys to greater prose
all this and more
to thee I wish
upon the whisperings,
of this verse.
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baronhawk
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Re: Lending My Muse To Thee
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by Kie on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
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Oh if it were only possible to lend me your talent! I would write for 24 hours non stop and store up a hoard of poems and become famous. *Sighs*
Maybe I could make a muse machine that would steal peoples inspiration from their minds!
*Laughs wickedly*
This was beautifully written and wonderful to read. I also thought that it was great that you praised Mick for he does so much unselfishly.
What a great person you are to have written this.
You are very talented, extremely so.
Loved this one. Kie |
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Re: Lending My Muse To Thee
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:19:47 PM AEST
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I agree...I don't think Kie needs any more inspiration....but I guess one can never have too much eh..
This was a very special thing for you to do tho. I'm sure she was thrilled.... Lovely write...
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Re: Lending My Muse To Thee
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:04:31 PM AEST
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And I kind Sir will take your muse and hang it on a star..........heavenward........for as far as you can see.......and then when all the rhymes are said, and everyone has gone to bed......I'll turn on your muse......and light up the whole world instead!
Ah.......but your poetry.......is so inspiring you see.......simple beauty........with revelry!
Thank you for inspiring me too!
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