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Wise
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do u take me as a joke,
Or someone u can't stand,
Early this morning I awoke,
Cause the nightmare never ends,
There's nothing to keep me away from u,
And we I have a plan,
I end back up with u,
Now I have to see what I have at hand,
I never knew u could be so crazy,
And I've noticed lately,
That u are not the person inside,
Of you,
And u are trying to hide,
Things u do,
Sometimes I wish I could leave u,
And I bet u be so confused,
There won't be,
No more hurting,
Inside of this heart,
You played your part,
Of a fool,
Now u think u cool,
Another day of pain,
Tired of the rain,
Falling down on me,
Making me feel like I'm nobody,
You hurt me within my soul,
Your words could never console,
A heart like mine,
Stop wasting your precious time,
On me,
If u can't recieve,
The one u need,
Like I said before,
Just let this sister be,
Walk out the door,
You don't need me,
Cause if u did,
You would try to spend,
More time loving me,
Then hating me,
See I try all I can to love u,
But then I get confused,
Cause sometimes u won't ,
Talk to me and I don't,
Wan't to go through this again,
How can a girl's heart win,
Yours if u acting so strange,
And u don't look me in the face,
Like u use to,
What's the use,
Of us even getting together,
Cause I do doubt it won't last forever,
So this is my time,
To be wise
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luckycharm
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2004-03-28 19:57:05]
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Re: Wise
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:14:36 PM AEST
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| Wisdom comes with experience and age. A shame one has to learn these things the hard way. A nice poem and a shame you used the "U" instead of the word. It flows well with you speaking from your heart. |
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Re: Wise
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:23:33 AM AEST
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You have described your feelings so well. As Stacy Orrico said "I hate you, but I love you, I can't stop thinking of you." Love can be a terrible trap. Keep writing.
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