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Just you and me
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:55:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have so much sorrow
I have so much rage
As globs of tears
Fall on every page
Looking out the window
I look at the bright stars
Wondering if this world
Could someday be ours
Without you I have no life
I need you here
So you could catch
That falling tear
Be with me everyday
We can change our lives
So people can say
That we survived
Copyright ©
xoblondiebabix3
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2004-03-28 20:55:54]
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Re: Just you and me
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by LouisaMontagu on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:12:54 PM AEST
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Well Done, Xcellent write
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Re: Just you and me
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by Jupiter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:44:22 AM AEST
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| This is a really, really good poem. It remindes me of my girlfriend and I and I love that thought. VERY GOOD. Keep it up. -Steve- |
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