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pain
Contributed by
moon_light
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:40:07 PM in AEST
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The pain never stops.
the tears fall like rain drops.
you'll never forget what you did.
young and afraid you took advantage.
you never paid.
I think every night that,
you could do it again.
what if the child is not so strong?
their pain would last just as long.
I was lucky! i got away
But, what you did is what i see
forever in my memory.
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2004-03-28 22:40:07]
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Re: pain
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:49:48 AM AEST
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This is a well written haunting poem. Very good. I hope you'll get over it.
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Re: pain
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by thumper on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:16:10 AM AEST
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This is great Jen. But you know, everyone pays in the end. This person may not be paying right now but when he does, well let's just say......Payback's a *****! Luv Ya!
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Re: pain
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:18:11 PM AEST
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hey jen this is a good one, but who is it about? well ill see u at school bye
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Re: pain
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by Baby_Grl on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 11:49:05 PM AEST
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Hey That is a good write. i really liked that and that is so true and jsut so good. Thats really good. Good job sis.
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