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Deity
Contributed by
Atomic_
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:11:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A confession be made that my sisters and I were all sinners.
We would kneel to the sound of an open choir
Then lose track of the measures and notes of each player.
For times have changed,
And it won’t get better.
I’ve grinned at the thought of a weeping virgin
Her tears shed blood and she’d ask for my attention
But instead I broke her body into delicate pieces
And proclaimed to the world on my success
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Atomic_
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2004-03-29 00:11:30]
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Re: Deity
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:48:55 AM AEST
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| Great write! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Deity
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by Aislin on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:12:07 AM AEST
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Quite interesting. Well done.
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