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My Name
Contributed by
mandimay
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:00:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My name is the sorrow that floats in the air
My name is the soft pain wich will always be there
My name drifts silent and slow with the sea breeze
My name crinkles and cries with the dieing autumn leaves
My name is the soft patter of rain falling down all night
My name is the evil whispers hiding from the light
My name ishidden by the shore where maggots crawl
My name is different, just like me it's mocked by all
My name is tears falling when I lose a friend
My name is sad,bloody,and blurred in the end
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mandimay
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2004-03-29 09:00:37]
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Re: My Name
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:08:49 AM AEST
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Haunting, but well written. Keep up the good work and a smile on your face (I hope)
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Re: My Name
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:09:58 AM AEST
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| Very sad but beautiful poem...every verse is music to read. |
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Re: My Name
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by silent on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:32:38 AM AEST
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Strong imagery and well constructed, like the ending, keep it up.
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