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Symbolic world
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:38:23 AM in AEST
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I sit near the window.
Half of my face lit, the other left in the shadows.
What does this mean?
What does this symbolize?
Should I analyse this instant like in English...
or just stray from the point....
and consider what else lies around in the room...
How things could be twisted and altered,
manipulated into looking like things far far worse.
And feel dillusional and powerless and venerable and paraniod and open and broken and exposed emotionally...
the sun is shining brighter.
I guess it represents the light the future holds....
then why have I closed the curtains?
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Re: Symbolic world
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:47:40 AM AEST
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Good and thought-provoking poem.
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Re: Symbolic world
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:46:09 PM AEST
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I like this...it highlights dichotomies between light and dark, and how even if the sun is shining oh so brightly, the shadows it casts whisper and threaten.
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Re: Symbolic world
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:49:36 PM AEST
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fascinating train of thought! i feel exactly the same sometimes. keep up the good work!
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Re: Symbolic world
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by poison_touch666 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:28:33 PM AEST
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| nice poem i really think line 4 symbolises the whole edapus thing... lol only joking you know our teachers like tho, everything relates back to sex. good poems |
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Re: Symbolic world
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:25:36 PM AEST
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our english lesson are intense but too layed back at the same time. i can completely understand where your coming from with this. if i could stare out of the window i would. i love you work.
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Re: Symbolic world
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:30:25 PM AEST
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good ol' mr downes brings out the best poetry in people lol!
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Re: Symbolic world
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:07:41 AM AEST
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| i love the irony, do we look too deep into things? or does everything have a double meaning? i wish it was easier sometimes, esp in english with mr. downes... :-S |
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Re: Symbolic world
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by Coaster on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:11:42 AM AEST
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Great write! I loved the last three lines. Thanks a lot for posting this poem up. I look forward to reading more of your writes and keep them coming!
Ryan |
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