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Dead
Contributed by
little_genna
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:39:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Memories are bad,
Tears being cried over this,
Sad scene.
So many hurtful words said,
Over the years!
So many wounds I’ve had,
From you!
Yet still there are many,
Tears being shed!
I never hated you,
But you definitely seemed to,
Hate me!
Missing you is going to be,
Hard!
Many more tears will be shed!
It’s going to feel so
Empty!
Without you!
Copyright ©
little_genna
... [
2004-03-29 11:39:16]
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Re: Dead
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:45:25 AM AEST
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A really sad and touching poem! I hope the two of you will get together again.
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Re: Dead
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:32:52 PM AEST
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Liked the poem a lot. Makes you realize how important a good friendship is. Hope things work out in the end for you and your friend.
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Re: Dead
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:54:07 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad and I can relate to how u feel.
You are a good writer and I like your work.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Dead
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by Mihiri on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:57:11 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. Don't worry, he'll look back at those memories and realize that he had made a mistake about hating you. Maybe he doesn't hate you, think about it... Misunderstandings do happen. Keep writing! Good work! |
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