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Brummagem Dreams
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:10:45 PM in AEST
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brummagem dreams
that glint gold in the light
and if you just glance
sometimes you don't even notice
how the glimmers are only
gold spray paint
and art-supply glitter
(I always preferred
the glint of silver, myself . . .)
brummagem dreams
tawdry, they dazzle and shine
and mean so very little
meretricious, indeed--
sugarspun sickly sweet delight
that tastes ever so much better
than a full meal
(shimmery spray paint
covering clay . . .)
brummagem dreams
an easy method
of producing a smile
cheap, perhaps,
but they look so fine
hang them up by the window
and see the light shine through
(and it hurts so bad
when they slip, fall, and shatter . . .)
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ShadowDaughter
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:14:14 PM AEST
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What an interesting poem! I never heard that word before! Thanks for sharing it! Wonderfully written poem!
Anne :D |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:16:26 PM AEST
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Really cool! I liked this one. Especially for a Dutchie like me, to be confronted with such a thing as a Brummagem....
Hur |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:10:51 PM AEST
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| This i liked. I think this was a great wright myself. It sorta poored a bitter meaning sweetly. Biterly sweet is the only words i can come up with. Your one of the few to leave me short of words. Jolly good show. |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:24:17 PM AEST
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wow, such talent... taking a new word and making a poem this wonderful based on it... great job shadowdaughter... i applaud you.
Lindsey |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:22:32 PM AEST
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The title was like eye candy to the passer by.
The poem was interesting and filled with shining imagery...Well done.
Kie |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:13:23 PM AEST
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| very cool word, brummagem, interesting poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:25:24 PM AEST
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| now i have to go find the word myself. lol. good write. sandy |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:55:45 PM AEST
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| This is a nicely written piece Nora. I wish I could just look at a single word and write a poem out of it. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:07:21 AM AEST
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Loovly write.
good work and very creative.
huggs,
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Re: Brummagem Dreams
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:46:57 AM AEST
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sugarspun sickly sweet delight
that tastes ever so much better
than a full meal
(shimmery spray paint
covering clay . . .)
This is delightful. I love these lines best. Makes me think of when I would wake up as a kid and Jack Frost had decorated my window with icey snowflakes.
Wonderful!
Stitch |
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