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iron wings
Contributed by
spider
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Here I am
So far from the sky
These iron wings
They will not fly
Down here on earth
Our smiles fade
Our faces crack
And tears cascade
Here I am
So far from the sky
These iron wings
They will not fly
You said I'd find someone
Somebody new
But none of them
Compare to you
Here I am
So far from the sky
These iron wings
They will not fly
I wish I could soar
To where you are
To talk to you
My guiding star
Here I am
So far from the sky
These iron wings
They will not fly
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2004-03-29 17:10:13]
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Re: iron wings
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by PsychoScissors on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:52:31 PM AEST
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| I don't think it's too repetative at all! I think the way you repete lines gives the peom shape. ooh I bet that made a pretty song too...^_^ |
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