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i loved you
Contributed by
luckymacie
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i hear the faint sigh of your voice
as you tell me
sweet soothong words
and as you were sitting there
next to me
talkin about how much
you missed me
and it was then
i relized
i loved you
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luckymacie
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2004-03-29 18:14:39]
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Re: i loved you
(User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:47:35 PM AEST
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again another short but sweet poem... good job hun-e... its a wonderfull feeling to love someone but also to be loved by the person that you love...
luck to you
~neglected1~ |
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Re: i loved you
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:56:09 PM AEST
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| This poem is good. You got straight to the point and I commend u on that. Your words help the person realize that it's coming straight form the heart. Macie, keep it up my sister!!!.-luckycharm. |
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