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At War With the Creep Inside All of Us
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:32:17 PM in AEST
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Cosmic letdown, forces unseen
Answers to questions- the bend and lean
Forgiven acquaintances and forgotten faces
Blatant promises and familiar places.
Substance abuse as tears swell in the eye
Our friends and lovers cursed to die
Vacant premises of an eerie sound
Misplaced pieces once lost are now found.
Angelic hands caress the silky skin
Nine out of ten times your enemies win
Connect the dots and the pieces vanish, good bye
And all life is lost in the blink of an eye.
Crimson marks on hearts that bleed for the quiet
Numb lips scream the silent riot
Canvas of skin and bone fall eerie
And darken the eyes that have sang black and gone weary.
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Re: At War With the Creep Inside All of Us
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:40:07 PM AEST
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wow, lindsey, great write! brilliant and filled with vivid images that touches ones heart, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: At War With the Creep Inside All of Us
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:50:19 AM AEST
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| been there and fought that battle |
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