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Nostalgia Of A Mirage
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:19:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Marooned on the persistantly shifting sands
of the ambiguous desert
shrouded with flamboyant plumes of uncertain dust particals
The placid yet torrid desert with its complexion
grazed and governed by the unrelenting and shrieking chords of sun symphonies
Do cords of sun ever sway his way again
Maternally delivering him into the
placating arms of an eternal oasis ?
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2004-03-29 22:19:53]
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Re: Nostalgia Of A Mirage
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:13:53 AM AEST
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I like this. I got a bit lost towards the end, but that's only because I forgot what the title was! lol. Read it again and found it to be quite charming account of someone's perilous chase of the sun's delusion.
Innovative poem. |
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Re: Nostalgia Of A Mirage
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by rogad on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:46:54 PM AEST
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| Very imaginative and well devised, I enjoyed it :) |
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