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LIES
Contributed by
mystiquepearl
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:36:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm drowning with my own lies
I'm deeply entangled that
I'm aftraid I can't get out
I shouted and pleaded for help
But nobody could hear me
For there are no words coming out of my mouth
I'm struggling...I'm Suffocating
Got caught in the middle of it
Like a fly trapped in a web - just waiting to die
Lies after lies I get closer to getting screwed
I'm on a cliff...one more blow...one more lie and I'll fall
I wanna get rid of you..I HATE YOU!
I'm mad...sad...miserable
I feel so alone...alone with my lies and miseries
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mystiquepearl
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2004-03-29 22:36:58]
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Re: LIES
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:43:02 PM AEST
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Very well written. You used great imagry to express your anger. Great poem.
P.S. Since I didn't comment on your first poem, welcome to YPDC.
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