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Tired..
Contributed by
Drake
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:56:19 PM in AEST
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Ugh..
Today i'm tired, everyone is tired.
I aroused from my bed, before the sun rose up, my dad complained about how tired of his job he is.
Go to school, first period computer class, Teacher yelled about how tired he was of brats messing with the computers.
Second period comes along spanish class, Senora is exasperated about all the students taking field trips, and days off
Third rolls on, Algebra, functions,logarithms and graphs. She rants about, how tired she is that i dont turn in my homework
Ahh lunch relaxtion right? wrong people are still tired My friend complaine about how tired he is that our games involve too many people
Fourth english is here, pens drop and the teacher grumbled about how tired she is of people being vague and moving the due date farther away.
fifth is here history its a bore and he fusses about how tired he is of students talking to much.
Six now time to pick up my instrument and the maestro bemoans about how tired he is about having music all over the flor and the computer not working.
yay now im home doing homework and chores and now here i am tired of people complaining about how tired they are
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Re: Tired..
(User Rating: 1 ) by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:11:55 AM AEST (User
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Wow, that sounds like my school, all I ever hear is how tired everyone is. hint:caffeine.
Good poem, I like how you made it into a class-by-class story. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Tired..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Justalady on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:44:09 PM AEST (User
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Clever writing, it caused this 'tired" old lady to smile. |
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