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im here too you know
Contributed by
ur_in_my_light
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:59:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i am left behind
i am all alone
all of the time
not paid attention to
not noticed by you
im sick of the scorning
you need a warning
im here too you know
you make me feel so low
im getting desperate
im sick of being seperate
sick of alienate
sick of all your hate
you have so much pride
it infects everything
thats why i hide
with a broken wing
a broken soul
a shattered heart
a confused mind
that needs something kind
are you another person,
that will make me worsen?
make me deteriorate
as if controlled by fate?
like it had nothing better to do.
as a joke made me for you.
why is everyone different?
everyone unique?
some of them vibrant,
some of them bleak?
dont leave me
dont hate me
dont change me
i just wanna be me
are you a liar,
full of desire?
or born an outsider.
without that fire?
that thing that people see inside,
what is it? is it a drive?
is it filled with life?
what is mine then?
i can never seem to win.
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2004-03-30 01:59:28]
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Re: im here too you know
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by Avis_Nigra on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:03:10 AM AEST
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If I read this it almost feels like I know you. I love it for it might make me understand.
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Re: im here too you know
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:07:45 AM AEST
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I know exactly where ur coming from with this...U just feel so overlooked sometimes... maybe so unloved too... I dunno... but I can relate...
Nice job with the poem.. like ur word usage...
U have a way with words my friend... keep it up!
~Donna~ |
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Re: im here too you know
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:24:24 AM AEST
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| Wow, I loved reading this, you really spilled your heart out in this piece. I know what it feels like to be the shadow in the crowd, to be unnoticed while others dominate the attention. Chin up, we each make our mark in different ways and in different times. Good luck. |
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