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Parasitic Neglect
Contributed by
we_were_left_darkling
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:52:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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From satellite networks above Sickle spray the information hub Craning to the sky were heard The cables hum with your return To vacant thoughts that new-renewed Have atomised in overview Of what was then. And what is past Melts in the radiance of sparks. A sudden change is felt among My inbred memories- how I clung To you, you perfect fading song Tell me what I did was wrong Or what I said… If what I said in hesitance Was not called for in that circumstance.
Because now you dwindle in my mind Some words forgotten, some left behind Ghostly words that forced our ragged Discourse between our two rough lagging Anecdotal pleas for help, that wouldn’t leave And hardly with a space to breathe I said I would and you agreed…
Don’t you remember what was done How I ignored your words and spun Away on my trajectory Away, so you would never see The faults I hide... how I turn warmth To bitter cold and grinning gaunt And hatred deep, malevolent Brooding on the hours I spent Thinking you were everything- Weltering in the level sting Of lies that I could never tell You’ve neglected me so well
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Re: Parasitic Neglect
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:26:08 AM AEST (User
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Very well written piece I enjoyed my reading of the same. Thanks from bernard |
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Re: Parasitic Neglect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:55:58 AM AEST (User
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Yes, very well written. I can relate to the anger and hurt.
Stitch |
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