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Completeness
Contributed by
silent
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:12:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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What I am searching for is an understanding
so complete, I cannot start to comprehend
for knowledge is for the world
But what I search for is not
With this insight, that is unfathomable in my mind
comes an understanding of a different kind
For now it starts to become clear to me, my friend
That this journey begins at the end
You see, what I am searching for is too painful and unbearable to know in life
Which is why this journey, truly begins in death
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2004-03-30 11:12:00]
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Re: Completeness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:35:01 AM AEST
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| Good poem, although with quite a sad ending. Still, you pulled it off wonderfully, I enjoed it a lot, Broken-glass |
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Re: Completeness
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:15:52 PM AEST
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| its true... you wont understand until then end.... just like a good book or movie... you pull everything together at the end to get the full picture... nice write |
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Re: Completeness
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:45:34 PM AEST
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| hmmm... interesting..... i know that it was hugely monumental points in my life the times i was near death, changed me, great poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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