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Invisible
Contributed by
ghstangel76
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:37:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel invisible,Like you don't even see me,You set there and look right though me, can you not see me?I am here crying for you to see me,I feel invisible as i set here day after day,and still,You don't see, I am here,How can you not see, What is it going to take for you to see that i am here, I try to talk to you but you don't hear me, I wish I know what you was thinking, I feel invisible,You don't even see me for who I am or what,I want to be,You don't care about my dreams,I guess you don't care or is it that i am invisible, and you just don't see,or don't want to see,If I leave will you see me then,?or am I just invisible,You don't see me, you don't hear me, I guess I am invisible to you, but I'm not invisible to him, He sees me, he hears me,I am only invisible to you,
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Re: Invisible
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST (User
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erg... i don't like the invisible feeling, you captured all the emotions that go along with it... good writing! ;0)
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