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When Words Of Love
Contributed by
Justalady
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The tear that smiled,
the smile that wept,
when words of love
were left unkept.
The flesh with warmth,
the warmth turned cold,
when words of love
were left untold.
The soul with pain,
the pain turned inside,
when words of love
were left denied.
The heart with feelings,
the feelings so deep,
when words of love
one finally may keep.
Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
2/11/2003
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-03-30 17:49:21]
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Re: When Words Of Love
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:09:35 PM AEST
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I can't believe you don't have more comments on such a strong poem!This was amazingly beautiful,so touching and so heartfelt.Everything was in it's place,written with grace.Kudos to you on a great write!
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Re: When Words Of Love
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:58:58 PM AEST
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wow......this is really good...theres alots of emotion..keep up the good work
luv always |
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Re: When Words Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:03:01 AM AEST
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Simple. straightforward and sublime.
This works for me.
Well done. |
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