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Unchanged Love
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:56:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Today tomorrow seems so far away.
The wait is in vain.
So safe in the unveiled light of love unchanged.
The Truth that could set us free,
Is collapsed under a thousand burning lights.
Twickering and burning out.
Like a comet entering our atmosphere.
Concealed by disbelief.
The riddle stays locked and hidden,
In loves unchanging light.
Afraid of remains that laid unchanged.
In our fragile dream.
Ashamed of our shattered remains.
The promises we made.
Drained by anger and grief.
Fazed by the envy and greef.
In the light of love unchanged.
Our secret cries for release.
The lucidity hidden deep within this light.
Its a riddle locked inside.
Its a riddle that lays slain in out hearts,
and is only concealed in our minds.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-03-30 17:56:43]
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Re: Unchanged Love
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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i love how the writing layers itself atop itself, deep thoughs mrking around it... great write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Unchanged Love
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by TeRrahiel on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 08:16:38 AM AEST
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| I'm afraid that this poem isn't yours in 100%. It's much the same as HIM's Sweet Pandemonium |
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