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bunged saying goodbye
Contributed by
neglected1
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You didn't think i could alter
I proved you wrong and walked away
Only i manage the way i reply
Only wish i was someone else to you
I need assistance to modify the pace
Even though i push you away i don't feel you close to me
Words are erroneous and promises wont be kept when made by me
I've taken away everything entirely
Never seems that i could be
Breahte in the vapors of your life as pungent on them
Pick pointing someone to blame
Could i be something more than i've become
I think i'm scared of being more
If i fall would you pick me up or stand above me and take stavs at no cost
Only inquiring loneliness
Only if i bunged saying goodbye
Sitting inside me feeling ashamed
Nothing even matters
I see the right choice but my heart is filled with dread
It all sinks back to what's in my head
I know it longs to be right
Sometimes i wonder why its this way
As soon as its over its over for me
If i was to surrender would you take my flag or deny my ways
Seems so much harder to fight
Failed to see how destructive i could be
The more hurt the more you mar
The price you pay to play my game
I'm kind of tragic kind of insecure
But i know i'm the only one that can fix what's so unordinary with this glory
Your lifted while i'm down
Its time to ask what we are
I don't see how i can move on without you
I try to pay attention as i assimilate all of you
But the words just seem to disappear
If i was to dig myself a hole in your heart would you let me in or lock me out
I suffer brokenness i wont walk out until you know
No one entraps me as you do
Here i go shattering my lungs trying to get to you
You are my only one
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neglected1
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2004-03-30 19:23:12]
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Re: bunged saying goodbye
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:30:19 PM AEST
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| I rather like the wording here. It's very unique but I liked it. |
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Re: bunged saying goodbye
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by luckymacie on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:19:39 PM AEST
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i like this one verry diffrent than ,any of them up here verry good
macie
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Re: bunged saying goodbye
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:59:32 PM AEST
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It is so hard to say goodbye........but after 67 years I've learned.......if you are miserable being with him.......indecisive about you and your ways.......walk away. You will never have any peace!
This poem was up and down, up and down..... very emotional write for me.......because I was there once you see.
Always off balance, never able to stand.....You did a great job of making see just very hard it is for you to be free!
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Re: bunged saying goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:32:18 PM AEST
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you put your emotions across so well, very well written.
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