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Wondering
Contributed by
Xion_alXar
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:13:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you told me
that sad story
is when I first knew
that I liked you.
I thought that you liked me too
but I see that may not be true.
And so on you I wait
to end this fight
inside of me.
The winner may be insanity
but if you tell me eventually
the winner may be sanity.
You worry over friends
but if they were friends
they would let it go
for they were both told no.
Maybe you think I'd hurt to know
the answer was no.
I truly wouldn't though
the wondering may bother me more so.
Friends we could still be
if you'd let me see
how you truly feel.
I swear I would still
be your friend
until the end.
I don't want a no
but I don't want to know
that you say you do
just so I woudln't be hurt by you.
Copyright ©
Xion_alXar
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2004-03-30 22:13:17]
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Re: Wondering
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:52:15 PM AEST
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| Well done! |
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Re: Wondering
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by JadedExistence on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:31:58 AM AEST
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Sad and painful. I hope you get your answer soon. Welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Wondering
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:34:14 AM AEST
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Hmm what a sad poem, I have your attitude as well but what if she/he says yes? That will keep naging you all the time! I know from expierance! Very well written poem!
Anne :D |
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Re: Wondering
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by Jupiter on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:46:18 AM AEST
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| Very emotional and to some people it would be hard. Stuff like that i take hard. Well done. -Steve- |
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Re: Wondering
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by lonelywolf04 on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:21:01 AM AEST
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u do some deep stuff man hey i know u i go to school with u ur my pal lol but at lest u ryme un like ur cuz u truely r turnin in to me welcome to the darkness its fun at times but in the end u must beat it and when u do let me know how u did it dont it suck every 1 says love is great yes it can be but when u have what is goin on with u it sucks then u get me and its just not right its just wrong but u realy do have some deep stuff funny how all urs is about love and mine is about pain in a diff. way but keep on rymein with great timein
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