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I saw you
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:30:17 PM in AEST
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I saw you at the pool
I saw you at my house
Your face brings me happiness
And your voice does too
Everytime I hear it
I get a sweet feeling
Deep down in my heart
That youre the one
And I knew from the start
I saw you in my classroom
I saw you with my friends
I want these sweet beginnings
To never come to ends
I saw you everywhere
But then you disappear
In the wind I heard something soft
As you whispered in my ear
That youll always be with me wherever I go
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xoblondiebabix3
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2004-03-30 22:30:17]
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Re: I saw you
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:34:14 PM AEST
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AWW!!!!that was seriously awsome hun,u really know how to make a tear jerking poem
cheech |
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Re: I saw you
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:35:04 AM AEST
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| This was a very sweet poem and I knew this feeling very well at one time. Nice and it brough back so many memmories of warmer days in spring with her. |
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Re: I saw you
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:31:44 AM AEST
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What a heart felt poem! Hmm you have a major crush here dearie ;) Best wishes!!
Anne :D |
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Re: I saw you
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:09:54 PM AEST
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| This was touchingly sweet! Liked it alot! Christina |
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Re: I saw you
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by Depression-chan on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 07:25:01 PM AEST
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| Adorable. :D Also, I was reading the comments and I say someone say Christina. (That's my name.) XP Lol. Anyways, I liked the romantic view of the poem. |
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