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MY DARK KNIGHT
Contributed by
mystiquepearl
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A hunter lurking in the night
From the moon you gathered your might
A century had passed and still you live
Outliving those people you had learn to love
Darkness took you captive
Given you immortality
A forever agony
In the dark shadows I hear your woes
Making my heart bleeds with your sorrows
I feel your emptiness
And with the meaningless of my life
I pray you to come to me
and let me walk by your side
And we'll ease each other's distress
An eternity of companionship and love
Every night I call upon you and at last
In my sleep you come to me
Your eyes are dark clouds
Gray...sad...beautiful -- Frightening
You smiled -- a sweet solemn smile
And the moon shines through your fangs
My knight of nights
You had come for me...
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mystiquepearl
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2004-03-30 23:16:26]
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Re: MY DARK KNIGHT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:08:44 AM AEST
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An intriguingly dark write.
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Re: MY DARK KNIGHT
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:28:19 AM AEST
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Ahh what a brilliant intriguing write!! I love it!!! Its really one of the most alluring poems I've read! Really loved it!! Keep it up! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: MY DARK KNIGHT
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:26:07 PM AEST
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The more I read the more I wanted to read. Keep it up. Keep em coming.
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