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Choking
Contributed by
b_rand
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i wear a stone cold emotionless face
and declare my life an ocean of waste
a broken home with no place - to go
no friends who can say - they know
what ive been thrown, im alone
slowin down to eat the food off a bone
and im scared
i am aware that the care isnt there
and i could suffocate now
when theres plenty of air
because with no place to go
i got no room to breathe
my lifes in a bear hug ready to squeeze
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b_rand
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2004-03-30 23:22:03]
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Re: Choking
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:14:03 AM AEST
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| This is good! Keep the poems coming! |
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Re: Choking
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:19:37 PM AEST
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I like it a lot! Know exactly where your coming from. Look foward to reading more of your writes.
Ryan |
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