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What is...
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:23:29 AM in AEST
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Is it a whisper.
Lingering on your tongue,
ready to spew from your mouth.
It is what it is.
What about a glaring gaze.
So strong it bends lead with a solid stare.
What about a whisper.
So fragile and true,
that it could be broken if spoken to loudly.
Maybe its a dream.
A sad dream,
one that brings tears to our eyes.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-03-31 00:23:29]
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Re: What is...
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:39:37 AM AEST
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| You have a great talent brewing here! Good job! |
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Re: What is...
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:49:48 AM AEST
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| I kinda liked it. It had a nice flow and rythm to it. It was enjoyable though a touch short. |
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Re: What is...
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by Funny_Pants on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:19:53 AM AEST
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| This poem is really good. Is the idea of lead being hard to bend purposeful? |
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Re: What is...
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:21:54 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading it! A sad poem You've made me think lol (thats a rare thing :p) Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: What is...
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:01:36 PM AEST
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maybe this is a sad write too, but a VERY good one. ;) great job mortis.
Lindsey |
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