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i miss you
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:05:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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'I miss you'
is that what you want to hear?
because thats what I've been feeling,
since 'us' disappeared.
I miss the way you touched me,
and the things you used to say,
the way you sat and watched me sleeping,
and made sure that I was safe,
the long talks we used to have each night,
each word still fresh within my mind,
as we sat in out spot and chatted,
long into the night.
'I miss you'
are they the right words to say?
because my heart is still calling for you,
hoping you return to me one day,
and on that last night I saw you,
you hugged me, I wanted to die,
because something small inside me,
knew it was all a lie.
'I miss you'
if only you could hear me whisper these words to you....
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2004-03-31 12:05:20]
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Re: i miss you
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:24:26 PM AEST
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this is such a poem.....but stay strong......good write!
luv always |
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Re: i miss you
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:27:25 PM AEST
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| its a sad poem..sorry forgot to add that |
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Re: i miss you
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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Omg this is a really really good poem, i can relate to some of the things your saying!! Awesome job!! Xcellent!*~ Luved it!
Good Job! lol~
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: i miss you
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by xDeex on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:54:53 PM AEST
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This brought a tear to my eye, and I'm no quit sure why because i'm really happy with my boyfriend now. I guess it just makes you look outside the box and what could happen. It really touched me... great job! Keep `em comin.
-Dee- |
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Re: i miss you
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:16:25 PM AEST
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| This brought so many emotions to the surface for me. So many uncountable nights I have wrote similiar things, had "missing you" thoughts and it was my own personal tormentor. I hope it gets better for you soon. Do NOT give up on love, it will come again... Kie |
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Re: i miss you
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by silent on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:18:56 AM AEST
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Very sad but well described, "knew it was all a lie" that hit hard. Good write.
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Re: i miss you
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:48:01 AM AEST
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One of your best. So sad and telling and touching. "Since "us" disappeared" is my favorite line.
Stitch |
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Re: i miss you
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:41:40 AM AEST
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What an emotional write. Excellent indeed and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Can relate to some of those feelings, its not easy when we are without the ones we love and not been able to do a thing about hurts even more.
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