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Wherefore art thou...
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wherefore art thou my soul?
Where have thy feelings gone,
from so long ago?
Thy whole has been encumbered
by pain, by hardship.
It is time to abandon these sufferings,
carried oh, for so long!
Let bygones be bygones and start anew.
Throw away that lonely, painful shell
and have love create a refreshed home.
A new Dome for precious feelings,
which will grow and glow with a...
Genesis Beginning!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
... [
2004-03-31 12:06:53]
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Re: Wherefore art thou...
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:57:40 PM AEST
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This is a great write i especally (sorry for spelling mistakes i suck at spelling) liked this part
Throw away that lonely, painful shell
and have love create a refreshed home
You are a great poet please keep amazing us with your work! |
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Re: Wherefore art thou...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:00:58 PM AEST
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The more times I read this, the more I got to like it, as I wasn't sure about the old Shaky style reference at the beginning. Yet, you managed to level it off with insightful words and a hopeful message.
Good job. |
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