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A New Word
Contributed by
butterat_zool
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:08:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What great cost would not be paid
to teach my pen
a brand new word?
What sweet wine would no tongue touch
without the gift
of just one seed?
Kiss my mind just once
with your sweet music gifts
and I will fill the casks of Rome
and make the gods snub their nectar.
Copyright ©
butterat_zool
... [
2004-03-31 15:08:24]
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Re: A New Word
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:42:45 PM AEST
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Ah I wish to expand my vocabulary! Good flow and great poem!
Anne :D |
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Re: A New Word
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:58:14 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, i love this poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A New Word
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:16:05 AM AEST
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You've got a certain natural flair about your words that screams "POET! POET!" If you had lived and died a few centuries ago I'm sure you'd be famous by now.
Love the first stanza and the 2nd last line seems very promising... but the final line is a bit like.. eh? |
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