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life's test
Contributed by
ivy
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is sorrow in life,
there is sorrow that cries.
It is painful and full of grief,
to see your friend weep.
You are hurt and you are sad,
it makes you feel bad.
To see your friend down,
because of which things seem grey all around.
You feel helpless and not in your best,
everything seems to be a mess.
A part of your life is not bright anymore,
you try to find reason to cheer your friend who seems to be so alone.
At such times it feels as if life has given you the toughest test to pass and clear as the best.
Copyright ©
ivy
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2004-03-31 16:30:20]
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Re: life's test
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by spider on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:15:16 PM AEST
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| kind of expains how i feel except on top of ym friends hurting i am too, and then all the pain stams from guilt as well. pain can only get worse. good write tho, very expressive. |
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Re: life's test
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by The_Poet on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:10:41 AM AEST
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| Some lucky friend you got yurself here.. Can you write one for me too... Lol.. ;) |
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Re: life's test
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by Damien on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:14:11 AM AEST
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| There is no test that you cant pass, coz you are already the BEST - Damien |
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