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Miss you
Contributed by
booboo
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:11:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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its been too long and we're lost without
you,what should we do?can't you
see what we're going through?
theres nothing we can do
we use to spned long hours
on the phone,just sitting there
talking about nothing,just make
eachother laugh and be happy
i'm lost without you and i miss you
i need you here with me,just
like old times,what am i gonna do?
sitting here,i miss you
walking down the street,looking
for your hand to hold onto
but no one is there,not even you
so many days not knowing what to do
sitting in class watching the
clock slowly tick away, no one
is ever in sight,but they're always
there beside me,all i see is you
if i had one wish,it would
be to hold you forever
i would never let you go
again,forever in my arms
i'm lost without you and i miss you
i need you here with me,just
like old times,what am i gonna do?
sitting here,i miss you
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booboo
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2004-03-31 17:11:52]
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Re: Miss you
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by spider on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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| so sad. if is written about a present ordeal then i hope u find a way to cope without being so sad. i especially like the bit 'lookign for your hand to hold onto but no1s there' i feel like that so often. sometimes i dont even knwo what im looking for, i just wish sum1 was there. |
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Re: Miss you
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by spider on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:19:57 PM AEST
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| so sad. if is written about a present ordeal then i hope u find a way to cope without being so sad. i especially like the bit 'lookign for your hand to hold onto but no1s there' i feel like that so often. sometimes i dont even knwo what im looking for, i just wish sum1 was there. |
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Re: Miss you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:47:37 PM AEST
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such a sad poem but well crafted.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Miss you
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 06:56:09 PM AEST
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these words are so true n meaningful,, spoken from the heart..
A Very Well Done
Louisa xx |
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