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Innocence
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wind blowing through the trees
Voice whispering, "Help me please"
Water flowing, down a stream
Whispers become a pain-filled scream
Birds gliding through the air
Children laughing, without a care
Flowers blooming, all around
Animals grazing on bloodstained ground
Plants growing, strong and tall
No one hears the pleading call
On the grass, in the morning frost
Childhood stolen, innocence lost
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2004-03-31 23:07:27]
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Re: Innocence
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by Saitou-sama on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST
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| This was so cool. You captured an emotion that I really can't put a name to. Well done. |
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