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the sun
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:08:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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what could i get you
in order to gain you
to see the chance
that i yet still seek
to prove to you
this love is all the way down deep
every prayer
cant be answered
but this one i seek
tears me down
my whole soul
is lost to the sun
and you are my sun
your that brilliant light
that guides me each day
through darkness
and this world of terror
but without you
i cannot see
i need that light
to guide my eyes
so gaining you
is all i seek
why cant u just see???
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marsh62287
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2004-03-31 23:08:21]
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Re: the sun
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by Remy on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:51:47 PM AEST
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sounds as if unrequited love eats away your patience... good write! hang in there! ;0)
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