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roses
Contributed by
marsh62287
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:14:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i wanted you
u wanted him
i gave you all
and through it all
i shall fall
you stripped my flesh
you stripped my heart
you channeled my personality
only increasing my immortality
i lose again
but u win
you gained him
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marsh62287
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2004-03-31 23:14:48]
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Re: roses
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:33:42 PM AEST
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Good job, i understand ur hurt and ur emotions, very strong... great write
Keep it ^! luved it
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: roses
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:40:58 AM AEST
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Wonderful Job! Great write! i liked these lines a lot:
you stripped my flesh
you stripped my heart
you channeled my personality
only increasing my immortality
Wonderful discription! |
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Re: roses
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:34:22 AM AEST
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| ive been there and it sucks :)_ nice description of you pain |
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