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My greatest fear
Contributed by
evryrose
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:18:45 AM in AEST
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Sometimes my greatest fear is
Your tear-stained pillow
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2004-04-01 02:18:45]
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Re: My greatest fear
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:34:47 AM AEST
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| good job! I think its short one line though,...but wonderful peice |
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Re: My greatest fear
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by intelectualpoet on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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Babe,
Yet again you have stollen my thoughts and fears right from my mind, I fear the samething.. |
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Re: My greatest fear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST
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My thoughts? Hmn.
Could the fear of tear-stained pillow be as an ever-stained pillow, with no head resting upon it?
Or, you say 'sometimes', because you desire it often, or periodically, the need to feel the other display emotion?
Or, it could be that you simply hate to know one cries, but one cries for myriad reasons? In bed, one may cry tears of laughter, joy or sadness . . .
Sometimes my greatest fear is an open-ended question . . . |
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