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Maybe Tomorrow
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:15:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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All alone in a crowded room
No one seems to see or care
Surrounded by the horrid noise
He won't shut-up
He says to kill, but will
Keeps the blade still
"No one controls my life"
He's angry Head hurrting
A throbbing pain
Astruggle for sanity
The battles over and there it it
Blood trickles out of pale white skin
He's won again
Maybe not in the end...
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2004-04-01 06:15:04]
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Re: Maybe Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:42:14 PM AEST
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oi vey, twisted and distorted... creepy! good writing, yet still it's very dark...
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