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And the struggle continues
Contributed by
dAWn
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:33:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I’m sitting here again
trying not to feel this pain
caused by the loneliness of my heart
look at myself – disdain!
my whole existence – vain!
and there’s no end in sight
every time there comes a wain
takes away all of my grain
- all the joy from life
my precious little insane brain
my little world, my little domain
my solitary padded cell
but no!
Life is something from what you should not refrain!
all the dragons can be slain!
there’s a morning after each night!
life is something you should drain!
with every pore and gladly, fain!
don’t let it pass you by
my composure I must regain
before I become a human stain
- a shadow avoiding the Light
……our happiness are reigns we should grasp……
Copyright ©
dAWn
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2004-04-01 08:33:01]
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Re: And the struggle continues
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:38:54 AM AEST
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That is easily related to Quite easily, in fact. I've also written of self struggles and your poem really hits home. I like the scheme and rhythm as well. Just remember: If the world didn't suck, we'd all fall off.
Smile for me,
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Re: And the struggle continues
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:14:44 AM AEST
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i can identify with this i've slayed some dragons in my time...
nice write.
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