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The Skies Dripping Razors

Contributed by bleeding_chains on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

The skies dripping razors
They cut so deep
That i felt the blade carve my bone
And the world
Disintigrated into a tiny black hole
My shadow left me
It ran away
Alone crying razors ripping my eyes
Shreding my smile
Left me to die
In the puddle of blood
While the skies dripping razors

Copyright © bleeding_chains ... [ 2004-04-01 11:04:20]
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Re: The Skies Dripping Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:38:24 PM AEST
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ugh, razors and blood, never liked those together! nice poetry, gothic and dark as hell though...
~Remy~

Re: The Skies Dripping Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:28:37 PM AEST
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very wierd, but very awesome. I like the image of your shadow running way that is just brilliant and something I had never thought of before. Rad poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Skies Dripping Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:43:32 AM AEST
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very dark, i love it.. brilliant. *hugs* phil xxx

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