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Bitter Love Sonnet
Contributed by
ksprincess42004
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:39:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I bleed so beautifully you once said
My love I am glad I finally pleased
But I will no longer succomb to your bed
The pain you caused has never been a need
I will spend forever trying to undo
The deep-seeded damage you seeped into me
All the games you forced me to play with you
Has left a ghost of who I used to be
I will beat the demons I possess now
I will somehow rise above who I became
To live successfully is my vow
And my vengence on you is now my aim
Watch your back carefully my dearest love
You might soon be visiting the Lord above
And now the hunted becomes the hunter
Hoping that revenge will rain upon her
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ksprincess42004
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2004-04-01 12:39:59]
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Re: Bitter Love Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:58:36 PM AEST
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It's deserving of praise, this one. Very descriptive and depicts raw emotion, thus;
"And my vengence on you is now my aim
Watch your back carefully my dearest love"
Overall, a nice poem.
Thanks for sharing, KS. |
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