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How Can I...
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:11:46 PM in AEST
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How can I describe these poundings of my heart,
but in the likeness of waves crashing upon surf.
thunderous poundings those hammering crests,
and yet a caress as gentle as the breeze.
how can I attest this tightening in my throat,
but as the tight embrace of absent lovers reunited.
a lingering feeling of constricting curves,
the sweet sweet tingle of skin upon skin.
how can I explain a glimmer of your face,
but as the landscape of heaven on loan to mortal lands.
a picture of beauty perfection formed,
the graceful depiction of an angel's pose.
how can I express a timbre of your voice,
but as a symphony of angels singing celestial songs.
the tunes the melodies a sweet respite,
tantamount to murder upon weak weak hearts.
how can I impress the sublety of your touch,
but as the gentle warmth of summer lingering on frozen winters.
a brush a tingle and perhaps a little more,
the delectable musings craddled in delight.
how can I protest the dalliance of your eyes,
but as pools of pleasure that deliciously drowns.
the waters of love crowned by lust,
a taste of the luscious pleasures to come.
how can I resist the offers of your love,
but as a willing slave donning gilded chains.
the surrender of will the lifting of veils,
opening the sight for visions untold.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2004-04-01 15:11:46]
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Re: How Can I...
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by Remy on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:15:01 PM AEST
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interesting write, poetic and hearfelt... i like this one... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: How Can I...
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:30:13 PM AEST
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one word to describe this poem....
...great :) |
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Re: How Can I...
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by Kie on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:05:10 PM AEST
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"how can I express a timbre of your voice,
but as a symphony of angels singing celestial songs.
the tunes the melodies a sweet respite,
tantamount to murder upon weak weak hearts."
You make words come alive with beauty.
*Sighs*
This whole poem makes me feel nostalgic and leaves me deep in thought...
Kie
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Re: How Can I...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:28:11 PM AEST
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This is so sad but beautifully emoted with such descriptive words. Makes tears well up in my heart. You still have a heart, my friend, you just showed it to us.
Rita |
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Re: How Can I...
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:07:31 PM AEST
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| Ah but the heart lives on in your work. Your poetry is your soul when it seems all else has fled. With every key that is pressed your heart does beat. So the world turns. The heart can not die. Such love has never been captured as it was in your poem. The one word to truely describe it is Briliant. |
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Re: How Can I...
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by WalkingWithDeath on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:32:14 PM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. I hope your patner felt that strongly about you to. Love like that should last forever. |
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