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I want to die!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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living conditions,
aren't that great,
the giants above mock us,
because we're in this state!
shock waves,
send deep vibrations through my brain,
sending deep flavoured emotion,
through out my veins.
i lie frozen on my bed,
all these things inside my head!
i lie in the dark,
inside my self, i've a dead heart!
all the time, i always burn.
how to make it stop, i guess i'll never learn!
it gobbles me up, inside it's whisper,
and keeps me swollen, in my pussing blister!
and so i get crushed,
and i send my piercing screem,
it sends shock waves, which haunt my dreams!
and when i see it,
"my deep inner vision",
and the more i think about it,
the more it grows into my decision!
i am sensitive,
yes, i know!
i am breakable,
but can't let go!
it moulds me down,
shattered and weak,
so i close up small,
and don't speak!
my life, i can't divide, i can't hide, in my disguise, i can't pretend that things don't collide!
black emotion is always passed through me,
it makes me think of death,
and won't let me be free!
...and that's the reason why,
i want to die!
until the point of suicide!!
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2004-04-01 15:31:10]
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Re: I want to die!
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:43:04 PM AEST
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Oh, I really hope you feel better soon. This seems so unbearable. You should know that you've got my support, if ever you need to chat or whatever. You know, etc etc. I'll be there.
God bless.
Take care,
Ellen |
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Re: I want to die!
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:43:08 PM AEST
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Your frustation is nicely expressed. There's so much in the life, we just can't control. So much is out of our hands. But i believe in you.
so just keep giving me your words and I will give you my support as well as my narrow minded replies. peace out. |
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Re: I want to die!
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by LiquidChaos on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:44:56 PM AEST
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great write--and i totally understand. but don't give up! it took being sent to a mental hospital and some time in the icu to realize that life is what you make it--sometimes i wanted to die because i felt that i made no impact in this world of so many many people. but now i realize that impact so many of us long for won't happen by itself. open your eyes to kill the anger. take control of what is yours. and don't give up. keep writing!
addie |
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Re: I want to die!
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by poison_touch666 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST
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| Yeah, nice poem i especially like the end quite confusing, or just too complex for my simple mind to understand, i actually was going to comment on this yesterday but it was really long and i was too sleepy to read. |
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Re: I want to die!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:15:41 PM AEST
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| A well put together poem--Emotionally, very powerful. |
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