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Wanting to be with you
Contributed by
Xion_alXar
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:39:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I see you I can't help but smile,
When I can't talk or see you it's like a file,
Slowly gnawing away at me.
I hope that maybe one day you'll see,
That I truly do want to be with you,
I don't want to use or hurt you.
I sat and went through my emotions looking,
to see if this feeling was what I was thinking.
It is and I'm sure of that now or,
I never would have told you and so I wait for,
you to tell me how you feel.
Even if it's a no I would still,
like to know to cease the wondering,
so I could be knowing,
what to do next.
Copyright ©
Xion_alXar
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2004-04-01 18:39:28]
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Re: Wanting to be with you
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by KimKim on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:42:08 PM AEST
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| That is sooo sweet!! it makes me think of what i'm going through.... great job!! it really did touch me deeply and now it encourages me to tell him how i really feel. thanks! |
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Re: Wanting to be with you
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:01:10 PM AEST
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omg i totally agree with Kimkim.... that is so sweet!*~ u write very touching poems and it touched me deeply.. Luved it so much!! Keep it ^! write more!!
*Luv ya*
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: Wanting to be with you
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by lonelywolf04 on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:21:04 AM AEST
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| u do some deep stuff man |
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