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Past the Wall of Despair
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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tiny porcelain corpse
I stitch you up with angel hair
so that you'll last forever
and pass the wall of despair
daddy loves you so much
and I do not care
that the world did'nt want you
cause I will always be there
the wounds are crying black tears
for the unwritten dreams of yesterday
I carry you over the wall of despair
past the thorns of reality
we travel past forever
into fields that have no name
onto the footsteps of dawn
here we'll start again
Copyright ©
doug
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2004-04-01 18:55:04]
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:24:23 PM AEST
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Smashing.... absolutely smashing. I'm completely speechless.
*stunned silence*
You really did well.
God bless,
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:33:20 PM AEST
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Doug, what can I say. I am so sorry that you had to experience this. Your love shines though it for the child.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:37:42 PM AEST
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wow... I honestly am speechless I don't know what to say this was so damn good and so sad.
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:28:22 AM AEST
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heartbreaking Im sure your child knows that you love ( he or she) touching write
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:14:20 PM AEST
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| You did an incredible job putting your feelings, pain and emotion into this poem. I am so sorry for your loss. Kie |
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:01:41 PM AEST
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| i'm sorry you have gone through the loss of your child in such a callous manner............no one should have to endure that........i know......and i care....... |
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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A poem that is sure to deeply touch all that read it.You have done a fine job on such a sad subject.A memorable poem.
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