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Shoot Me
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shoot Me
Don't shoot me in the foot,
For I don't deserve to life another day.
Don't Stab me in the stomach,
For missing is to great a chance.
But stab me, shoot me,
Where it hurts the most.
In my soul,
Which is inside of my heart.
I don't need to suffer through pain,
Cause pain is being left alive.
Shoot me, stab me,
Where I will feel it,
But only for a second,
For pain of death,
Is only pleasure to my heart.
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2004-04-01 21:08:00]
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Re: Shoot Me
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:07:34 PM AEST
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Very strong write ,I could feel the desperation.
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Re: Shoot Me
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:07:26 PM AEST
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Very Sad, But Well Written
I Could Feel Your Pain In This Write...
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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