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Something To Burn
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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And I've never known a friend like you
I've never known someone that's so true
And you've become a part of my life,
a part that I can't even write
It's a place that has been empty
And I just want you to know,
that I think you're special
Wish my words were seen,
and could tell what I mean
When I say I've found something to burn,
deep inside of me
I never thought inside my mind,
that we would get this close in time
That you would fill a part of me,
that has long since been empty
And I just want you to know,
that I think you're special
Wish my thoughts were heard,
and could fly like a bird
And you could know you've lit a flame,
deep inside of me
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-04-01 21:35:54]
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Re: Something To Burn
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:45:54 PM AEST
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This is sweet . . . loved the imagery with lighting a flame; a great depiction of true friendship.
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Re: Something To Burn
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by arden on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:09:32 AM AEST
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very sweet and thoughtful. very well written. loved this. great write.
Arden |
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Re: Something To Burn
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:30:44 AM AEST
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This Is Very Sweet Loved It.....Keep Em Coming... :-)
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Something To Burn
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:29:35 AM AEST
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| Incredibly romantic and thoughtful...Whats that saying? "They lit a fire between them without any kindling" Something like that, I think. Anyway that came to mind. Loved this poem. Kie |
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Re: Something To Burn
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:18:48 PM AEST
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| When the spoken word can't be heard what a lovely way of telling someone they are very special! Nicely done. June |
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