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The sky I am
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:43:37 PM in AEST
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My tears are like rain
Rain drops from the pale blue skys
As my tears drop from my pale blue eyes
Crashing to the ground
They keep coming they keep coming
They never stop
Once they eventually do
They return with more
They flow down my face
So many tears
That when theyre done im soar
The rain shows my depression
The thunder shows my anger
Striking the sky
But also striking and hurting myself
My anger doesnt come as often
Just like thunder
Why do I show tears instead of anger?
That I truly wonder
Its times like these
When I realized why
I have so many similarities
With the sky
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Re: The sky I am
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by Parrotwing on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:07:34 PM AEST
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I really like the corellation of tears - rain -depression and anger - thunder. Very interesting contrast of feelings with nature.
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