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sacrifice
Contributed by
marsh62287
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:19:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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those eyes
that kill
might just have
a certain will
maybe even
to be seen
by just me
to die just once
would make such certain
that i died
to look upon
the girl i loved
just that once
sacrificed all
but saw the light
of my girl
that i need
and i shall wait now
until she reaches me
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marsh62287
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2004-04-01 23:19:25]
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Re: sacrifice
(User Rating: 1 )
by AsrealTheFallen10 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:32:56 PM AEST
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I think it was ok I mean it could also be better but any poem could be better. Good job though.
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