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ask god to erase me
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:28:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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our breath was trapped on the outside of love
this is only the desire, a feeling we endure
our eyes are met only in lust with no comfort at all
this could be love but neither will look to make sure
don't look now but that's my heart that you're stealing
when im with you i've the desire to ask god to erase me
don't deny the heart the love it craves
bury me in the distance of your heart of fire
kill the love you shared with others (the liars)
this could be the beginning of beginnings
for you, for me
i haven't known the sound of singing
in so long
endless is the day and i want it like that
we could live to infinity and still ask for one more day
steal me a new life and we will be okay
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fallensilence
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2004-04-02 10:28:04]
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Re: ask god to erase me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:32:36 PM AEST
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wow....
very good write... I love it. |
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Re: ask god to erase me
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:25:13 PM AEST
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wow that was beautiful fallen, for some reason though i could see it being a really good song... just me though.. great write, full of emotions. Thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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